Mustang and Hawkeye were really kinda adorible at the end of chapter 14, i wish you could of seen my reaction... then again maybe not (there was literal flailing and squeeing). Despite the adoribleness and the potential ribbing later, i feel the engagment was a little sudden. Don't get me wrong i love a good bit of sap, even from a distance with jouvivnile comments being made, but i think you could have done that seen withoout the implied engagment.
anyways as for this chapter... noa. alive. in fransheska... creepy. a little morbid. and a little wierd. but ok. but only because Jean likes her, and i love Havoc. and i suppose she needs to be there to help lead the new age of alchemy in her world.
kick ass storey and i'll recomend it to anyone, and i'll be waiting paitently... ok maybe not so paitently, but i'll be civil about my impaitence... for the AU!SPINOFF!AU thing you're going to do.... either that or write it myself... though that may end in disaster when my RoyEd fan side will try and take over... i'll have to beet it back with the Royai...
anyways love happyface and joy ^_______________________^
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Mustang and Hawkeye were really kinda adorible at the end of chapter 14, i wish you could of seen my reaction... then again maybe not (there was literal flailing and squeeing). Despite the adoribleness and the potential ribbing later, i feel the engagment was a little sudden. Don't get me wrong i love a good bit of sap, even from a distance with jouvivnile comments being made, but i think you could have done that seen withoout the implied engagment.
anyways as for this chapter... noa. alive. in fransheska... creepy. a little morbid. and a little wierd. but ok. but only because Jean likes her, and i love Havoc. and i suppose she needs to be there to help lead the new age of alchemy in her world.
kick ass storey and i'll recomend it to anyone, and i'll be waiting paitently... ok maybe not so paitently, but i'll be civil about my impaitence... for the AU!SPINOFF!AU thing you're going to do.... either that or write it myself... though that may end in disaster when my RoyEd fan side will try and take over... i'll have to beet it back with the Royai...
anyways love happyface and joy ^_______________________^